Category: Writers Block
Monday, January 2nd 1991 - 2:36 pm
Dear diary,
I open you up and hope you will be my new best friend.
Let me start out by telling you a little about
myself. My name is Kcaitlayn Mclynn and I am 13 years old. I was born on Febuary 23 1979. My family is from the northern part of California, but because of my fathers job we had to move to a completely diffrent country, we are now living in Newcastle England. I transferd school's last year, and have been making wonderful friends, like Emma and Anastasha. I am excited to see what the rest of this year will bring me.
Well, daddy is calling me for supper now, so I will write in you lader, my dearist diary.
With love,
Kcaitlayn m
Tuesday, January 3rd 1991 - 4:30 pm
Dear diary,
Today was an amazing day! As you may or may not no, it is holliday here in the UK. So that means no school for 2 weeks!
Emma and Anastasha slept over yesterday, the night was filld with late night gossip over the boys in our grade.
"Can you believe that Arial is dating Jaick Maha?" Emma asked.
Ah, Jaick Maha, the most popular boy in our year. He is in year 11 while the rest of us are in year 9. He has short dark black hair, and baby blue eyes.
"He's so dreamy." I said after Emma made her commint about Arial beeing with Jaick.
We were so busy gossiping we didn't no that the clock was haff past 12.
We then headed up the stairs and in to bed.
Diary, I had a great dayy.
With love,
Kcaitlayn M
Thursday January 5, 1991 - 10:35 am
Dear Diaary,
Today I was not able to see Emma, nor Anastasha, and or our friends Sara and Michelle couldn't come over.
So since they couldn't come over, I spent the day drinking tea, and reading the paper with mummy and daddy.
Well diary, that was pretty much my day.
I'll write in you more, I prommis.
Love:
Kcaitlayn M
Saturday January 7, 1991 - 6:45 pm
Dear diary,
These past few days have been a big jumbled mess of anger, sadness, happyness, and more anger.
Let me see if I can explain why I feel all of these amotions, in sted of the happy - go - lucky Kcaitlayn that you no.
Lets start off with Thursday night.
As you no my Mum and dad are not to fond of the fact that I hang around with kids who are visually impaired. they say that I won't lern how to let kids have their own independence. However the 2 kids that are blind, Emma and Michelle and that is totaly blind, they use a cane to get a round.
Next off is Friday:
On friday I woke up, feeling a little off because I knew to day was back to school. I got up, got dressed, and hedded on the metro.
It took me 1 hour to get to my school. I only have 4 periods, and the first one is English with Mrs. Sarah Buckly.
In English I have Emma with me, so it is really nice to have some extra company.
Next class is Math with Mr. Maha, coinsidentaly that is Jaick Maha's dad. I am kind of like the class pettle, because I always stay on Mr. Maha's good side.
After math it's lunch where I hang with Sara, Emma, Michelle, and Anastasha. However their is this dew girl, her name is Britney, and she is from Central California, I used to know her when we were little kids. She is totaly blind, and she uses a guidedog.
Us other girls arnt aloud to pet her dog when it is working, though menny of us are tempted too.
The last period of the day was studdy hall. In their we have
Miss. Mcfeebee working with us.
The kids in their are:
Me, Sarah, other Sara, Anne, Anastasha, Michelle, Britney, emma, and Marianne.
After studdy hall Emma, Sara, Michelle, Anastasha, and now Britney go back to my house for tea and cookies.
Well I guess that is it,
Love,
Kcaitlayn M
Hi, what is this exactly, and now that I've read it, what comes next?
yawn ...
Now, now, Nymphadora, that's not nice...
I liked it, but as I said; what comes next, a bit of drama perhaps?
It's just a little something I'm werking on, and i'm not sure what happends next, any ideas?
Morgan
What should come next is a look into how great the family is, or how not so great the family is, and then, something to distroy that perception of things. Perhaps A fatal car crash, someone is accused of a crime, murder even? The plot needs to get going...
hey morgan, I rally liked it. you've got the start of something really good, maybe research the trends and fashons of the time period you've got your plot set in, so early 90's tv shows clothes they were waring, what sorts of things were people into back then, and then relate it toyour characters, lets get to know these girls a bit better, and caitlin, is she VI too? or sited? and if she is sited, is theere a reason why so many of her friends are VI? Why don't her parents want her to be hanging out with these other girls? what's it like living in england. Do here parents want caitlin to just ignore her blindness and intergrade with the *normal* kids? are they in denial? It's really coool so far.
Hey babe. I love it. If you need any help with some stuff i can give you a hand editing it. Love matt.
Hey, you know what the writing kind of reminds me of? Go Ask Alice. I'm not saying you're trying to copy off that, but I'm reading that book right now, I came on the zone and saw this story and saw a little bit of similarity. Was that your intention? I agree though, if you plan on continuing it, you should make something happen. A big event that changes her life and perspective, or a series of events over time. I'd say a series of events, because it's a diary, and will keep your readers interested. Hope I helped.